1st paper: Galiano, Y., Ramirez, C., and Schneider,S.
A Contrastive Analysis of Two Research Papers
Title,
abstract, acknowledgements, introduction, literature review, methods, results,
discussions, recommendations, references, and appendixes are the main parts of
Research Papers and Research Articles. A research article is written by researchers to make specific findings
known to the scientific community. In this paper, Introductions and Methods
sections of two research papers from the medicine field and the education field
are analyzed and described.
As far as the introductions are concerned, both
articles follow the Create a Research Space Model (C.A.R. S.), which has been
created under the principle that writers use organizational patters to present
their introduction. Consequently, they are structured in a general-specific
manner. Both are similarly structured
though Sun and Chang’s (2012) article is more extended. Both articles seem to
follow the three moves in research paper introductions which are establishing
the research territory, establishing the niche and occupying the niche (Swales
and Feak, 1994). As regards the first move, in Sun and Chang’s (2012) study,
vast literature has been consulted; more than ten authors have been cited in
this section. In Roth et al. (2010) paper, the authors reviewed several
previous researchers’ results and findings. However, the citation of authors is
not as abundant as in Sun and Chang’s (2012) research article. As far as the second
move is concerned, the authors of both articles indicate a gap in previous
studies which motivates them to conduct further research. With reference to Sun
and Chang’s (2012) paper, the gap is indicated when the authors state that the
blogs were only seen as a medium for the development of language skills. In
Roth et al. (2010) study, the authors found a gap between their beliefs and
previous literature review since no other researcher had examined the impact of
mortality of revaccination with intradermal BCG vaccination. As to the third
move, both authors outline the purposes for their studies. Sun and Chang's (2012)
aim is to “…explore what kinds of writing-related topics the students blog
about [.] ”(p. 43). In Roth et al. (2010) article, the authors expected to
determine if BCG revaccination reduces mortality in children at 19 months of
age (Roth et al., 2010) and indicate the structure of their papers. As for
their content, Sun and Chang’s (2012) paper can be labeled as a purposive study
since it specifies the main purposes of the study and in Roth et al. (2010)
article as a descriptive study as it describes the study, according to the move
3, occupying the niche. As for the use
of tenses, it has been carefully treated throughout the sections since present
perfect was used to show the importance of the study, past simple was used to
refer to what the researchers did and present tenses were used to what has been
found.
Reflecting upon the methods section, both
articles have subdivisions. Sun and
Chang’s (2012) field study is divided into three sections: participants,
procedures and data analysis. In the participants’ section, the number of
participants, the level of proficiency, the frequency of classes and the
duration are described. No descriptions of materials used in the study have
been stated and the actual questionnaire is included in the previous section
called “Research questions”. There is a brief comment of the questions at the
end of the data analysis section. The tenses used are mainly past simple active
and passive. Regarding Roth et al. (2010) article, the sections are divided
into sixteen short sections. Every detail is thoroughly described and treated.
The participants are presented as Study Population and relevant demographic
information is included. It is important to highlight that in this study, the participants are
chosen and divided into groups by means of a randomized trial.
The materials used are described in the Study Design section as well as
Follow-up and Informed Consent. Moreover, both authors include many graphic
organizers in the form of tables and graphs to show the statistics. In Sun and
Chang’s (2012) article, these are included in the data analysis section and in
the Roth et al. (2010) research paper, they are added in the statistical
analyses section. The tenses which are widely used are present
perfect and past simple passive and active.
The main characteristics of two research
articles have been analyzed and conclusions have been drawn. The introduction
and methods sections have similar features as regards content included but the
length of the sections is dissimilar. Although there are a number of superficial
differences, when analyzing their structure deeply, it is evident that the
specific academic requirements for research papers are present in both articles.
References
Roth, A.E, Benn, C.S., Ravn, H., Rodrigues, A.,
Lisse, I.M.,
Yazdanbakhsh, M,
et al. (2010). Effect of revaccination with
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10.1136/bmj.c671
Sun, Y. &
Chang, Y. (2012). Blogging to learn: becoming EFL academic writers through
collaborative dialogues. Language
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Swales, J.M.
& Feak, C.B. (1994). Academic writing
for graduate students: Essential tasks and skills. Ann Harbour, MI: The
University of Michigan Press.
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